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This was very well written but this should just be chapter 1. You left a lot of open space that could be filled with all your emotions.

Before you ask I am not looking for detailed or summarized sexual situations.

You got me invested in the characters too. I just want more.

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William J Ritchotte II
William J Ritchotte II

Written by William J Ritchotte II

I am a writer and I must do it daily or lose my wits. I read and I write. I sit and I breathe and dwell on the Divinity w/in me. My goal is to encourage people.

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